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Daniel
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I am
You see
And all I can think of is you
You were
I know
But some things have to change
We aren't
You and I
And never again can be
You see
And all I can think of is you
You were
I know
But some things have to change
We aren't
You and I
And never again can be
You may say that the last bit doesn't make sense. And if you do, I shall promptly ignore you.
I don't want criticism on this.
I like it the way it is.
Written between the hours of 3 and 4am.
Daniel.
Edited
Replaced last bit with 5am contribution
On the advice from =echelon-maniac
Original was:
"We weren't
You and I
And never again will be"
I don't want criticism on this.
I like it the way it is.
Written between the hours of 3 and 4am.
Daniel.
Edited
Replaced last bit with 5am contribution
On the advice from =echelon-maniac
Original was:
"We weren't
You and I
And never again will be"
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I love this... I can relate to it well.... ):